< Minimalism

~fish-fingerer

This limerick has far too many syllables,
Its rhyme and its metre remind me of dribbles,
But to make it more minimal,
Would really be criminal,
‘nd r’m’v’ng th’ v’w’ls j’st l’ks t’rr’bl’!

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~rosie88 wrote (thread):

HAHAHAHA why do I picture a bathroom wall when ever I read one of your "poems"? :P

~analog wrote:

+1 :)