Wow, I don't know whats better. That Negroni or your draft!
There's not much, if anything, to improve.
I centered it a little more and "figgled" a bit with the "the".
But I dont't know. The 'e' is tuff and your "plaintext" version harmonizes more with the "Est..." footnote.
+ _. --- ._ ' . .-'` ``. '-. . . .' `.===-' '='. ' ___ /_ __ ' + _ _ _ ( / / //=_ _ __ ( / ) )o / o / _/_ ( / ) / / / /, __/ ,_ , _, /_ / /--', , / / / (_(_(_/_/ /_(_(_)_/ /_(__ / (_/_/_) /| - Est. 2020 . . (/ .-. ' .-'=. ' ' '.-. `, .'.' * ' -. ___ .- *
Edit: euromancer's idea for the 'i's crosse my mind to...
+ _. --- ._ ' . .-'` ``. '-. . . .' `.===-' '='. ' ___ /_ __ ' + _ _ _ ( / / //=_ _ __ ( / ) ) o / o / _/_ ( / ) / / / / , __/ ,_ , _, /_ / /--', , / / / (_(_(_/_/ /_(_(_)_/ /_(__ / (_/_/_) /| - Est. 2020 . . (/ .-. ' .-'=. ' ' '.-. `, .'.' * ' -. ___ .- *
Edit: Just me or are the 'i's in the first one taking a wizz to the left and flashing their buttocks in the second? :)
Yeah, I think plaintext the looked better. Although that moon is *terrific*
Edit: as well as the t rocket and smoke clouds, although they'd make the sign too big