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From: "Eddie Glover" <eglover@nemonet.com>
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Subject: Score!
Date: Tue, 4 Mar 1997 00:55:46 -0900
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Here's a story I wrote for Sapphire's contest called Coming
Apart..........
Coming Apart: Score!
Travis Fenner dribbled down court as the clock ran down, he was a
rookie guard for the Dallas Wranglers and this was the game he'd waited
for. He'd finally been able to start after the veteran that had the job
had been injured. Now as the clock ticked towards zero he had a chance to
win the game himself!
He saw his wife in the front row as he dribbled past, she'd come to
the game with some of her friends again it seemed. Then he saw the blonde
cheerleader smiling at him, her lush body revealed by the tiny uniform she
wore. His attention wandered as he stopped and the man guarding him
knocked the ball away and raced to the other basket, dunking emphatically
to put the game away.
"Don't play with a wandering eye kid!", the other player laughed
while walking past, "There's plenty of time for that later on!".
"Fuck you!", Travis snapped.
Jennifer Fenner frowned at her husband, she'd seen his eyes wander to
the buxom blonde cheerleader. She'd long suspected that he cheated on her,
now as he brushed past her towards the locker room she smacked the chair
in rage.
"I told you Jen, now you see firsthand....he only wants a piece of
ass, he cost us the game with his moronic lust!", her friend Trina
growled.
"Indeed Jennifer, as one of the coven you will benefit from the spell
as much as anyone.", the head of the coven, an older woman named Melissa ,
mused while standing.
"But...what about his career?", Jennifer sighed...then realized what
she was doing....defending the bastard...rationalizing his ways....just as
she always had.
"I can see it Jen, you're sick of him....sick of the way he's treated
you.", Trina said.
She watched Travis pat the cheerleader on her ass and frowned,
"You're right......let's do it.".
Travis threw his jersey into the locker with a snarl as his teammates
walked past, each snapping at him for his stupidity. He glared at them,
all a bunch of old men hanging on to my game, he thought. They all had
wives like he did but these fools actually turned down the babes that
constantly approached them.
"Way to go asshole!", Freddy Howard growled while walking out of the
shower, "If you wouldn't be such a shit and just go home to that pretty
wife of yours we'd win a lot more often!".
Travis dressed quickly and left in a hurry, meeting the
cheerleader.....that he now knew was named Jill.
"Travis, I thought you were married.", the woman asked with a frown,
"I'm not some bimbo that you can just screw.".
"Me and Jennifer are getting divorced Jill. Besides I told you I
could get you a try-out with the Miami Rage for next year's Women's
League.", he said with a smirk.
"I......", she started.
"Listen, do you want to play hoops or just shake your ass every
night!?", Travis snapped.
Jill sighed, she would do anything to play basketball like this
little jerk. She wasn't a virgin by any means but this just made her
ill....what was she doing...was it worth....this?
Jennifer walked around the cauldron as her coven sisters followed.
They chanted in unison, preparing the spell for use upon their husbands.
Should any of their men make love to another woman they would be knocked
into a coma and their mind would swap with the mind of their lover.
She looked around, many of these women had nothing to worry
about...their husbands were good men who wouldn't even think of screwing
around. She saw Nina Howard, Freddy's wife, and sighed...she only wished
that she'd married a guy as good as Freddy. The guy was a millionaire but
still treated his wife as he had when they'd been in love in high school.
She smiled as the leader handed her a vial from the cauldron.......it
was the only thing that could reverse the mind-swap that would claim the
unfaithful.
Travis smiled at the naked blonde before him, Jill might not be the
bimbo he wished but she had a body that put his wife's to shame. She had
firm 36C breasts and round sweeping hips. She could pose for Playboy with
that kind of body he mused.
Jill was nervous as she stood naked before Travis, she'd never made
love FOR something before...she almost felt like a prostitute. But to
actually play in the big leagues....she'd always dreamed of it.
Travis slid into her warm slit with a grin....then something
happened.....he felt a surge go through his mind and his body seemed to
spasm even as his mind....snapped.
When the pain cleared he opened his eyes....and saw his own face
inches from him! Then he felt it......something sticking into his groin!
He screamed in horror as he felt the stiff penis that had been his
own inside his pussy. As soon as he heard his new voice he realized that
he was somehow...Jill!
"Jesus....Jesus....must be a dream...got to be...can't be
happening!", he sobbed in his high soprano while trying to push his own
male form off of him.
As he struggled to move the man atop of his female form the penis
inside of his slit was sliding inside his cleft...God it felt so big! He
felt his chest jiggling as he scrambled to free himself....36C's were
great on Jill.....but now HE was Jill...they felt so heavy on his
chest...and every time one of the nipples brushed against the male chest
atop of him he felt a tingle of pleasure.
He finally pushed the man off and was stunned to see his own body
fall almost lifelessly to the floor.
"Oh God! My body's dead!", he screamed....who could he turn to
now......looking like this!?
He had to get out....get home, Jennifer was his only hope to help
him. He grabbed the jeans and sweatshirt that Jill had worn, ignoring her
bra and panties as he dressed. He looked at his body on the floor,
breathing but seemingly dead to the world.....he had to get out.....would
someone think he'd done that to Jill....his own body!?
He raced to his Jeep sitting outside, his large breasts bouncing
wildly...and painfully. He saw a guy staring at him and his first thought
was to tell the guy to fuck off.....then he remembered...he was a
woman......God did that guy want to have sex with him. He could see the
man's eyes glued to his boobs.
Travis started the Jeep then saw his new face in the rear-view
mirror.....was this really happening!? Instead of the ebon skinned male
face he'd seen his whole life it was a gorgeous...and white woman's face
looking back. His blonde hair was slicked to the side of his head by the
sweat from their brief sexual encounter.
He pulled to a stop light and heard a guy whistle, "Hey sexy...come
one over here!".
A man was leering at him from the sidewalk...his braless breasts
again the center of the man's attention. He blushed in embarrassment...he
was being stared at like a piece of meat.
He pulled into the drive of his home and raced to the door, he still
couldn't believe that these tits bouncing around were his!
He ripped open the door and screamed, "Jenny! God Jenny please be
home!".
"I'm here.....Travis.", his wife said from the front room.
His jaw dropped, "How.....how could you know!?".
"Oh I figured you'd end up in that white bitch's body....how does it
feel....those boobs have got to be 36C or so...and you're not even a
virgin! How did it feel to have that dick sticking into your pussy? Was it
worth it Travis...was she good enough that BECOMING her was worth it!?",
Jennifer snapped.
"You....you did this...how? Change me back bitch!", he screamed in a
high screech.
Jennifer caught the small fist of the blonde white woman in her own.
She now was at least two inches taller than Travis and much stronger.
She decked her husband then ripped open the shirt he wore. Travis'
big breasts were revealed, the fat red nipples swelled as his wife lowered
herself onto him.
"I could have given you the reversal potion.....but I knew you'd
never change. It's all over Travis.......I think you'll like my new
husband.
Travis looked up in horror as his own body walked in with Jill
inside.
"Hello Travis, it seems you did keep your word. I will get to play
basketball in the big leagues because I fucked you. Jennifer followed us
and while you raced all over town in panic she gave me the potion to
awaken me in your body. As we drove here we agreed.....it's better for all
of us if I stay in your body. Jennifer doesn't want to have to worry about
her husband being a dog like you....now I'll admit it might be hard to be
a black man for a while...I really haven't got a lot of experience you
know!", she laughed.
"Please.....I'm sorry......don't leave me like this!", Travis sobbed.
Jennifer knelt to her husband and hugged her, "We're not going to
throw you out honey. I still love you...God help me I do.....but you'll
never be a man again. I'm sorry but I can't live like that......you don't
leave me any choice.
Travis sobbed on his wife's shoulder then passed out.......the horror
of his new situation hitting his male mind.
Two years later----Miami
Jennifer Fenner watched the buxom blonde point guard for the Miami
Rage dribble up court with time running out. The woman had become the
leader of her team since joining them last year. She didn't score much but
was the best passer in the league and everyone considered her a great
person to boot.
"Shoot Jill!", the tall black man with Jennifer yelled. He'd been
signing autographs all night, after all it wasn't often that an All-Star
like Travis Fenner showed up in public.
Jill Dorsey looked at the clock and then spun about a pick and let
fly......swish! The ball flew through the net easily, ensuring the Rage of
the championship.
Jill smiled as her teammates carried her to the locker room, she saw
her wife Jenny laughing and clapping wildly with Travis and grinned,
they'd all come a long way.
Jennifer Fenner blew her husband a kiss as her teammates carried her
about the gym. Who'd have thought that trapping Travis in a gorgeous
woman's body would make him a better husband!
Eddie Glover
Copyright 1997: "Eddie Glover" <eglover@nemonet.com> . If you want to post this
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