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Review

Seoraksan

Not the highest on the planet

But the highest I had ever seen

Not the prettiest in Korea

But the prettiest place I have ever been

Visability poor

at mountain top

Made you almost drop

your phone over the edge

four out of ten for visibility

Visibility poor

surrounded in mist

your slender figure

tentatively stepping

following my steps

I couldn't see very far,

But I could always see you

It was all I needed

Ten out of ten for Visability of you

Makgeolli with lunch at

base of mountain

Your laugh

Our conversation

Ten out of ten

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