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Title: Just So
Author: Annette Hakiel
Language: en
Topics: short story, anarcho-syndicalism, socialism, solar punk, fiction
Notes: originally written for the Grist Imagine 2200 inaugural fiction contest

Annette Hakiel

Just So

“Yes. We are almost done.”

—my husband, after I complain of our progressing ages.

Lock the door, lie down, and take off your mask; let it dangle by the

hook—just so. There will be no need to remove your clothes, dear; I

would have already just done so. You’ve been devastated your entire

life, dear, haven’t you?—or have you forgotten almost losing the world,

as I am now in this moment placing my left leg over your tattooed right

shoulder, moving your right hand down by my left hip, slowly, then

pulling down the sheets off of you, and watching as you slip off the bed

to push a towel against the bottom slit where yellow LED light sneaks

through the base of the doorway where we should put a door snake, to

insulate, for our building has been retrofitted for deep energy, and

it’s been electrified, but we can’t seem to figure that part out yet.

And one more towel at the foot of the bed, for later? Yes? I don’t have

to worry about pregnancy; I’m older, as are you. Take out your teeth.

And there you are, the future you, as if you’ve been marooned, S, and

you’ve never minded? As if the world having been saved doesn’t matter.

As if the chemtrails over the park streaming red, blue and green don’t

matter. Don’t conjecture. Don’t contemplate or estimate. Stop it, S;

you’re no good at it. S: it’s useless. You, licking wholeheartedly at

the small red oxbows collecting around the outer threads of the rinsed

pickle jar and furtively lapping a mediocre year of Bordeaux Superior

(the season still too hot) without realizing that you’re fixated, still,

on my delicate pink eyelids; future you, resisting that itch to

speculate with me upon the existence and survival of our outside world.

There’s no need to any more, don’t worry about any late Anthropocene

holocausts, there aren’t any, or won’t be any more, and so: sink into

me.

Yes, I see it
 Yes, do it, S. Perhaps the automated lights along the

streets will have already turned on, powered by wind and sky and a

battery made out of two lakes, in the distance, the lakes themselves

man-made, an eel farm, and covered by floating solar arrays; perhaps

there are silly teens spray-painting the otherwise ignored public works

of art outside, no longer sculptures of any confederates or racists in

this syndicosocialist utopia, for those have all been torn down in some

wonderful monumental mixed-manic dysphoria.

Perhaps for all we know in the future suicidal businesspersons who

couldn’t find a better job after the revolution hit leap out of

buildings downtown all afternoon kind of like they did in ‘01, for

different reasons; for all it matters, love, perhaps the true bones of

someone’s lord and savior have at last been discovered to rotate around

the sun in exactly the same fashion as everything else, his parables

having been thought now as lessons in sustainable development: no

overfishing; the strategic use of nets, and the use of the World Wide

Web, radio in extension services and the word; two fish as a family

limit and injunction against overfishing; the building of bridges to

walk over waters; also the use of bread and food and beverage to bring

people to a central location where an overseas farmer’s market might

rise up, after which, a whole city.

But none of that would matter to future you. It would be a given. Don’t

you dare start gambling on it, S; you mustn’t. Let’s say you luck out

with that crypto backed by trees. It doesn’t matter – pay it no mind:

sprawl across the bed in the haphazard positions so your limbs are numb

and you can’t tell which is which


S, you have been devastated, it’s true. S, you’ve been betrayed, but you

never said anything. That’s why later I’ll watch you breathe lightly in

bed, why I’ll keep an eye on you as the still loud but now electric and

AI driven eighteen wheelers still hums through the valley in the

distance delivering goods, toilet paper, the vaccines, at this pandemic

we’ve been living through...and you tremble...the moon light suddenly

flooding your completely oblivious body, with the way your put together

perfectly (S, how can you not forgive yourself?) your floppy

grey-wing-tipped hair, you sculpted shoulders, your articulate wrists.

Yes, I’ll climb into our future bed, S, I’m sure of it. S, I’ll touch

your shoulder. You would have one cocktail to celebrate and nothing

else. Yes, I see it, I’ll still worry about your breathing, for you

smoked, and this air, or what it was, smog choked, and I’ll first touch

your skin-sweet, muscular shoulder, the way only I can right at this

moment in the future, an old married couple together, celebrating the

momentous event, the world has been saved but for a moment and we’ve

reached that point, temporarily, that you were glad I worked on and

cared deeply for, even with my schizophrenia, but by work through poetry

and community, and but for which you barely mentioned, except in dreams.

As if you could have forgotten the world


From past to present, yes, S? You’ll forget all of it. You’re good at

this. You do it better than you could consciously do this. I still love

for my eyes to behold you, still, yes, for I love you, and you more

reasonable than you think you are, so it will be easy for you: from

sports stats to wars, celebrity divorces, time of sunrise or sunset,

number of minutes until the garbagemen is brandishing algorithms for

what is recycling and what is trash, the can loudly clattering down this

street every Tuesday at 4 am, or the time until he is suddenly wielding

the lids against the privileged hippistas (the new hipsters) pillaging

the curbside piles, those three who dumpster dive every week on our

street and who decide to eat, in a cartoon understanding of recycling,

food that’s already been thrown away. And why is it still? We haven’t

picked up composting, our building. But they do it at the MRF...they

sort all that, with machines, and with AI. And we will have the food

waste monitors. So, love, then forget you, this future you, then forget

especially all that came before—you can’t even fathom it. You will never

understand it, you’re bad at understanding such far out things. So:

forget it, S. Just enjoy. You weren’t made for such a tremendous doom,

so make our and this world afresh, made for you to glory in it. And just

glory, glory


You were made for the bed—so forget everything but this bed before you

and the naked woman you will be with.

Later, you will call to me, “Hey, chicken butt! Miss Sassafras!”

Later, you will call to me, “Hey Thighs like White Elephants, I got some

coffee!”

Do I trust you? after all these years, do I?

Does it matter? do you trust me?

So play dumb, only, don’t play, S. No more games. Just only: an

oblivion.

Yes. There is more than just one kind of oblivion. So choose wisely.

Choose this one, the one where we still have Earth, each other, in the

future, and the days later where I will have let the vegetarian bean

soup burn and completely evaporate on the induction stove top (you’ve

finally agreed to eat less meat). Where I’ll fail to do even one dirty

dish that either one of us failed put them in the water-saving sink,

barely manage to shower, though we do that less now, and after that,

finally put clothes on, the same clothes we have for the last forty

years, the clothes made in sustainable, durable fashion. But it will all

be for the better. Both of us should live like hermits, during this

strange second worldwide lockdown, binging for at least four whole days

on nothing but canned beans and sex and cheap wine (we have the access

to tap water, so no worries there) as if it were a form of sensory

deprivation and submersion of each other, completely sunken into each

other’s flesh and animalistic urges, like two beasts stuck in one locked

cage bound to either kill or screw.

Later, don’t let yourself leave the apartment, unless it’s to buy

toothpaste. Much too hot out. This much is necessary. And you won’t be

alone. At last! You won’t be alone! All those years in your office,

alone and working! Under the energy saving air conditioner. Behind the

smart solar glass walls. Up high in this mixed use wooden constructed

tower, first of its kind here. So let yourselves pivot; you will pivot

in small circles. Eat the string cheese straight from its biodegradable

plastic seaweed wrapping with nothing else if you must, then eat the

wrapper, in our kitchen, if you must, under the glorious solar glass

chandelier we got for our fiftieth. Gorge on carrots, farm fresh, or

split peas if you can. Get used to the smell of our own bodies, and

sweat. We are considered native New Yorkers, the soft-form sea wall set

in place, cement objects for shellfish. Stare at the water, now

replenished with oysters and dolphins. Be one with your body, that body

you so often ignore
 a life of the mind, law, and words, you have lived.

You retired today.

And although the world has been shut down again, we reached the point of

Drawdown, even if temporarily; that curve has been bent, back on itself.

And people know what to do and act and do so swiftly with regards to the

virus— are prepared this time for this new pandemic. Some were

surprised; we had saved forty-five percent of nature after all, and we

thought there would be less zoonotic disease. But it happened again.

This time no one blamed any foreign state. So remember the urge to

urinate, eat, defecate, drink, smoke your cigar, just this once, only

when you must, and the idea actually comes to you from some small

molecular need. S, it’s like you’ve been marooned your entire life.

You’re on no schedule. It’s like you’ve been devastated your entire

life, S. We never had children, S, and it’s the end of summer. No

progeny. But will still be ancestors. We call them on our devices.

Carbon emissions have already peaked, now the ppm has leveled off. What

was it all for? Three more fighter jets on bio-safe fuel stream past the

sky, streaming colors in red, green, and blue, and we show them, the

nieces and nephews, now adults. Even the flag has been proposed with

colors changed, more stars. Let me and your future self make prisoners

of our love for a week. For there are no more prisoners of law. Good.

They closed them, the prisons. Yes. You fought the good fight. Fought

for civil rights. You note here you have a free schedule, though you

will still do offer services pro bono publico. I know this, I asked

after you. That’s the way to do it. That’s the way it’s going to happen,

I’m sure of it.

I’m sure of it, S.

But, yes here in the future, the party is over. We saw the celebratory

low emission fireworks on the East River Estuary, now bestowed with

personhood. Everyone opened their windows and clapped and cheered,

blowing horns.

---

Oh, for the love of god—if that disembodied creature exists—you’ve let

your mind be noble, now let your body, just, be.

And for the love of god—if that disembodied creature exists—let me hear

it.

Open your window S.

Open it.

By the grace of all things holy that I know you do not believe in, let

me hear it: I want to hear you laugh and sigh sighs of relief. Cry.

Clap, cheer, and cry.

S, a wind is picking up.

Have you noticed? The wind, it is getting stronger. I think a light

storm is brewing, but no more cyclones, or worsening tropical storms,

just some gentle rain.

I look across the alley, I finish the dishes, put down the dish towel,

heave. No. no S, I’ve changed my mind. You haven’t opened the window

yet...and it’s not raining.

There’s our line hanging with clothes and sheets, such a regular sight

these days, dangling with our shirts, outside between the two buildings,

saving energy, especially in this heat, and underneath the solar glass

archways above every ally and street, harvesting infrared and

ultraviolet only.

If only I could be the one, S. The one to praise your soul, S. Your

soul. For life, I hope so. If only I could muster
may you be the one to

bury me.

S, this is happening while you’re older. Much so.

S, S, in the future do you remember me? Have we aged, together? gained

or lost weight? grayed? Divorced? Do you notice me still? Am I...alive?

There you are: staring into your mirror.

In the future.

Pick up the comb, S...pick up the wooden comb.

But no, S, you just stand there.

Because it was not that you dislike life, no, that wasn’t it. And it’s

not that you cared so much for living, but that you had grown used to

it. Yes, S, that is how you put it then, that future then: You didn’t

love life, (no, how could you?) but you had grown accustomed to it, and

that is why you don’t contemplate the act of suicide as a way out. You

consider yourself a good existentialist.

But, S. Dear, S! You are a bad, bad existentialist.

S, my pet! You pick up the comb! This is the way it is, the way it must,

alas be: for me to know you, all of you, to watch you, to keep an eye on

you, to completely understand you, to know you even more than the

biblical understanding of the word know, and for you to not even be

conscious of my existence.

No.

Because I’m a ghost, I’m gone. Because I know these things will happen:

you pick up the wooden comb. You pick it up because you want to comb

your hair, but when you move your hand all you’re doing is a good

impression of a man combing his grey, grey hair. Instead of parting it

on the left, you part it on the right.

And this is how we lived through it all, loyal, stubbornly optimistic.

And even if one dies.

And this is how we loved, just so.

No.

No, in the future, but the less distant future, I am not there with you,

I, like others, am gone, and the lost people in the West—including those

who go about their daily chores but are in the process of losing

earth—don’t spend these days wearing out the sitting room carpets of

their apartments, pacing over fading floral designs, all the while

wondering in which one of those two rooms they inhabit it would be best

for them to die, whether by their own hand, of nuclear war, the next

COVID 19, mass shooting, or droughts, fires, famines, deep freezes,

storms, or blackouts brought on by climate change. Such a morbid

occupation is generally the exclusive hobby of 90s miserable Goth

children, the histrionics of the 20s, incorrigible hack poets of the

romantic period, and the feckless.

And people who are losing earth don’t often commit suicide, it’s true.

They may, on rare unmeditated occasions decide it’s all too much and

step in front of a bus, but they certainly do not contemplate it. Their

heads are filled with other things besides thoughts of death, and aren’t

moping about the house with a death wish on their mind.

There are still readily identifiable traits that can tip a person off

that someone is a lost one. For instance, first and foremost, the

occasional but always breathtaking placidity of that future person’s

eyes — which may cause any inclement weather to be seen reflecting

therein — is often a key indicator that a body has lost earth, or losing

earth, and losing hope, as is the degree with which the eyelids start to

slope pathetically over said eyes whenever certain songs of longing and

yen, from Clair de Lune to a well-chosen Patsy Cline tune, plays

overhead on the Alexa. But a sure sign that someone has trying

desperately not to realize they are losing Earth but has lost it (hope)

and all they know is the way the chest can’t help but to rise and fall,

everyday, repeatedly, for a this future person persists and does not

commit suicide. It is still illegal and they respect the law. Life is

sacred. And all of humanity and the species other than human should live

in coexistence.

S, you will believe (and rightly, in my humble opinion) that, in terms

of location and behavior, the perceived high incidence of these lost

ones, those people losing earth (also called doomists, denialist,

inactivists
those who insist that we are all doomed from climate change,

or just simply those with severe crippling eco-anxiety) are in areas

where poor weather conditions predominate is an improvable truism. These

lost people in the now aren’t moving to rainy, windy, and/or cloudy

cities, such as those in the north on either coast, and around the Great

Lakes necessarily, it’s just the weather is getting even crazier

everywhere, and there’s more fresh water. But in fact, with the

lockdown, it’s hard for many of them to move anywhere at all.

The newly lost, for instance, are notable for their

peculiar lack of ability to lift up their own arms.

It’s true that those who have been lost and forlorn for quite some time

tend to sit in one spot and lean, usually against a horizontal surface

such as the counter at a deli, library, butcher, café, or the some

random American county DMV office, and languish. For years it seems. As

such they often grow either very fat or very thin when compared to their

original state. Lost people of the west, above all else, are waiting;

they know they might wait forever, that is, wait until eternity or

longer for the final end.

But in order to do so, in order to lean on, say, some random American

county DMV counter with a still the way that man does, with a sad look

of dismay and wait, patiently to lose earth, the lost person must be

alive. And anyway, they aren’t always doing so. That is, they aren’t

always engaged with leaning.

Leaning on at a counter at the DMV may be inhibited by, for instance, an

irreligious inordinate jerk sports nut refusing to take off his Yankee’s

hat for a driver’s license photo, stating with conviction that first, it

would be against his religion, and second, it would ruin someone’s home

run streak. Even though he took off his mask.

As one is refusing presently at the front of the line in which you are

in as I watch you from above.

Lost people are often found in lines, it is true. As are you. You go

about your daily routines and bump into them, rarely talking about the

very worst things. Losing home. Losing our planet, losing earth, losing

loved ones. But lost ones rarely give the impression of impatience or

impertinence in any obvious way. Crass, belligerent remarks like “hurry

up, dickwad,” or “c’mon buddy, let’s fucking get this over with, gimme a

break,” are rarely uttered by these forlorn. It’s not that they take

their fate at the back of the line with monk-like patience, or even

complacency, on the chin, or even great stride. And it’s not like they

think that they will be eventually rewarded with the true object of

their longing if they are patient enough. Lost people barely think of

such a reward. But what I mean to say is that lost people rarely tap

their foot, check their phone, stand contrapposto or with limbs akimbo,

too reticent to approach the very question, having already accepted

their status in an unremarkable but comfortably recognizable limbo.

If you were to follow one, you might see the round hump of their sloped

shoulders, the slow movement of their soft, befuddled hands.

And so for them to methodically move from kitchen, to office, to

bedroom, to deliberate on whether or not to use a bullet, a noose, a

knife, such thoughtful consideration towards the future is too much of a

level-headed thing for a lost person to do, to exacting and proactive.

Lost people don’t pace and consider suicide. Such a thing would be

utterly antithetic to their struggle.

Anyway, lost people—people losing earth— are more likely to imagine

other people’s death than their own death. Climate change being for them

a distant reality if not fiction.

Part of their plight, and indeed, identity, is that they are willing

witnesses to their own distress, to the fact of their lostness, their

incessant noise that the climate game is either a hoax, or a game

already up, a kind of deficiency of which they are excessively

possessive.

And so when future you, not so future to as have already won back hope

for Earth, and who has just gotten home from our morning errands (you

had needed a new photo ID), walks from room to room of your apartment

where your organic eggs are cooking, it isn’t because you are

entertaining gloomy thoughts of your own death and feel you have lost or

given hope on earth.

You have lost something else.

“Well, if you tell me what you’re looking for, maybe I can help you,”

L—, the maid who is paid very well and your helper, tells you as a you

scavenge and the faint scent of burnt toast emanates from the bright

kitchen.

---

You have moved back into to a rainy Northern America Eastern coastal

city somewhere parallel to the near the Great Lakes, which is not far

off from the northern American city that was your hometown, to work. You

know, on some level, that we might very well die here, but didn’t come

here to die.

For you, the pursuit of beauty, poetry, justice, truth, things are

undying.

Except, of course, your life. But you can’t help that. And you don’t, in

any circumstance, proactively encourage your own demise.

It would only prove that people like you weren’t man enough. Or woman

enough.

The lost ones though, how they pretend to others, or try to, and for the

rest of their life, that either they are not bothered by ‘it’ or that

‘it’ was a forgone conclusion for such an eager heart such as theirs

(‘it’ of course being the desperate failed pursuit of eternally or at

all obtaining the love-object, human eternity).

So as you shuffle between several different rooms of his apartment

located in one northern US state—looking now in the thin slot between

your undusted vintage mahogany roll-top desk and the wall of your home

office, and next in between the pages of the sci-fi novel you were

reading last night on his armchair that has moments of a terraformed

Mars—the rain coming down outside is completely incidental, and is no

direct indication of the sogginess or sleetiness or torrentialness of

your inner state, your shoulders slouching slightly, the smallest bit of

panic very at home in your slim chest, with the maid staring

bewilderedly at the back of your heroically, dumbfoundingly large head.

For those that are truly lost, lost earth, even the simply act of

turning the spoon in the coffee, the simple act of remembering in the

shower if one has already soaped up or not or already washed one’s hair,

the simple act of politely nodding back and responding to the man at the

booth, these things can become unbearable. And life is, yes, dear

readers, unbearable, but especially those in a state of having lost or

are losing earth But who is wont to deny the spoon, the shower, all for

the beguiling heartache of the lost of the immensity of the enduring

feeling of ideal and perfect lack? So is it really any surprise that

you, dear future widowed husband, who has lost his papers—papers!—are as

distraught and quietly forlorn as you are today?

Resigning yourself to live a life, connect with those you find yourself

next to by happenstance (perhaps once again), thinking life is not

filled with grand triumphant human schemes, but that this was it:

imperfect and casual, familial talk—you are beginning to believe that.

“My papers, L—. Very important papers. That’s what I’m looking for,” you

quickly answer her. You call your many digital devices papers, they are

that thin now as though you still remember using actual paper. You still

call the balcony the porch.

“Ok. What papers.”

“Important papers! White pages, with writing on it. Papers that I need.”

“Don’t be an asshole,” L—, whom I trust to tell the truth, tells not too

distant future you, as you search, turning her attention instead to the

kitchen’s burning toast.

And “Holy holy holy holy holy holy!” You are chanting romantically, to

me, in some netherworld, lost to the second pandemic which hit quickly

after the first, quoting Allen Ginsberg, for even the asshole is holy.

---

It’s not that me and you, my dear future widowed husband, have imagine

our death. That often.

“Breakfast!” the she sings out from the kitchen as the electric toaster,

just cajoled, as it must every other morning, with the help of the blunt

end of butter knife, finally yields a somewhat inharmonious ding.

All a tumult, unindividuated, and without center, you wash your eyes

over the horizontal surfaces of your home office.

You looked in every one of the eight manila “folders” on your desk, bag,

trash bin back beside your desk, in the pile of “papers” of which you

have no idea from where it originates but that is on his shelf

regardless, then again the trash bin, then again in your bag, then again

the eight manila folders on your desk, then again behind the desk and in

between the pages of the books you were reading last night. But

everywhere you turn there are distractions, sirens, stacks of the wrong

papers, objects conspiring against you so that even this most trivial

task has become epic; even though one now calls out to you about

breakfast and for you to hurry up, you cannot.

With legal pads, sheets of printer paper, forms, and digital files flung

everywhere, it’s as if you are lost at sea, it’s as if you have become

Ulysses.

You stand in place and survey the mess of your home office once again

from the doorway and sway in place slightly. “Thanks, but I don’t have

time!” You holler, again impatiently wasting food.

You sit back down at your desk.

Lost people may experience occasional dizziness.

Stumped by some mythology of loss that they cannot see past, having

failed to differentiate themselves from the soupy atmosphere of ideals

eco minded or otherwise idyllic, these people tend to drift, apparently

aimless and move through their discombobulated life, as a child heavy in

dream. A perceived but inarticulate sense of displacement haunts their

psyche, and they carry with them a burden of innumerable tiny crosses

which shine in no direction but mark all the absence in their starless

skies –an indefinite and formless constellation of loss...mapping

nothing.

Whence this cloud? Wherefore this befuddling, unnavigable mass, this

impenetrable thing that has somehow become life? Their life? Their

hopeless, shameful life — shameful for the very fact that they generally

have everything needed to live a normal, productive, fulfilling life,

whatever family that raised them, a well paying and intellectually

stimulating career, the ability to travel, not to mention the

heartbreak, yes, including the heartbreak that is supposed to accompany

such things as a full wisened life? How did we get stuck here? In this

fate to knowingly live without? Into a place where they should be happy,

perhaps more than happy, a place where “ordinary nameless

apprehensions”, baffling losses, misgivings, and hilarity still ensue

without regard or relation to the one they still long for, and yet the

meaning, if that’s what it is called the real wisdom or whatever has

never come, the meaning seemingly forever differed?

Your missing file was not in the pages of the science fiction book you

were reading last night. You rub your forehead then quickly pull the

“Juliana v US”, the historic children’s climate case, that file from

beneath your ass, on the chair away from the rest of the rubble,

specifically placed there last night for the sole purpose of not

misplacing it this morning. (The lost one’s innate affinity for the

concepts of magnetism, propulsion, and force often play out in the chaos

of their messy offices and bedrooms.)

And with that, you, after the hassle of this morning’s errands, runs

past the kitchen to the door, without even kissing poor my photograph,

not necessarily unloved, but unmourned and sitting there in the kitchen

holding a plate of toast and jams – goodbye.

You cross the street that is no longer flooded like it will be years in

the future, you hop quickly down two blocks south to get to the subway.

Although an ecab would keep you drier if you found one quickly and drop

you off right in front of the building where you need to be at now,

you’re running late, and the subway is assuredly faster, with no

traffic. It’ll be just crammed full of people’s rain-moist bodies

smooched next to each other, inches away, if not touching on another;

complete strangers on top of one another during rush hour.

But I wanted Earth back. I wanted us there. I wanted to be alive. I

wanted back Earth.

I wanted to love you, in the future, balanced like keys or a mask, those

on the hook, just so.

Citations

“ordinary nameless apprehensions”
 I believe this must be from Edward

Gorey

People who couldn’t find a better job
 is adapted from Tongo

Eisen-Martin