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~she12

Wow, I don't know whats better. That Negroni or your draft!

There's not much, if anything, to improve.

I centered it a little more and "figgled" a bit with the "the".

But I dont't know. The 'e' is tuff and your "plaintext" version harmonizes more with the "Est..." footnote.

  +            _. --- ._       '    .
           .-'` ``.      '-.     .
    .    .' `.===-'       '='.
        '      ___ /_ __      '     +
 _ _ _        ( / / //=_         _ __
( / ) )o    /    o      /  _/_  ( /  )    /
 / / /,  __/ ,_ ,  _,  /_  /     /--', , /
/ / (_(_(_/_/ /_(_(_)_/ /_(__   /   (_/_/_)
                   /|           - Est. 2020
  .     .         (/        .-.
         '  .-'=.            '   '
           '.-.  `,     .'.'
      *  '     -. ___ .-
                            *

Edit: euromancer's idea for the 'i's crosse my mind to...

  +            _. --- ._       '    .
           .-'` ``.      '-.     .
    .    .' `.===-'       '='.
        '      ___ /_ __      '     +
 _ _ _        ( / / //=_         _ __
( / ) ) o   /     o     /  _/_  ( /  )    /
 / / / , __/ ,_  , _,  /_  /     /--', , /
/ / (_(_(_/_/ /_(_(_)_/ /_(__   /   (_/_/_)
                   /|           - Est. 2020
  .     .         (/        .-.
         '  .-'=.            '   '
           '.-.  `,     .'.'
      *  '     -. ___ .-
                            *

Edit: Just me or are the 'i's in the first one taking a wizz to the left and flashing their buttocks in the second? :)

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~euromancer wrote (thread):

Yeah, I think plaintext the looked better. Although that moon is *terrific*

Edit: as well as the t rocket and smoke clouds, although they'd make the sign too big