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View submission: A Butterful 2021 Well-spent
its my dream to have any of my designs up at NYC giant Billboard. If you love it, Help me win this and get it to NYC Billboard and show everyone a Butterful world of love with BTS & ARMY. coz we're #smoothlikeButter 🥳🎉💜🧈 <edit: sorry for the typo/grammar mistake(s) found, too excited didnt rechecked! 😭thanks for spotting @mods! will fix soon!>
Comment by MovingGirls at 24/12/2021 at 16:44 UTC
8 upvotes, 1 direct replies
I love that you included mentions of ARMY, Thank you, and even a small "BTS" for the public who have yet to be informed 😉
However (and sorry for being the grammar police), I wonder if "A Butter-ful Moments Cherished in 2021" should be changed to "A Butter-ful Moment Cherished in 2021" (take away the "s" behind Moments) to signify that the Butter era/song was the cherished moment (make it singular)? OR take away the "A" at the beginning of that phrase to signify that the Butter era/song led to many cherished moments (plural) in 2021? I hope that makes sense!!
Comment by whyohwhy115 at 24/12/2021 at 17:19 UTC
5 upvotes, 0 direct replies
Hi there! To tag on to the comment by MovingGirls, just in case this design wins you will still have a chance to edit/fix grammar so don't worry about it for now! No need to resubmit (cause you already have votes) but you can add it as a comment to this post if you wish. Good luck!
Comment by whyohwhy115 at 24/12/2021 at 18:28 UTC
5 upvotes, 2 direct replies
Regarding your edit, no need to resubmit! ☺️