Comment by everything_is_holy on 15/01/2017 at 00:55 UTC

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I was really disappointed with *The Girls*. Emma Cline is a good writer, but the story's characters had no depth, there was so much "telling" instead of "showing", and it felt like a YA coming-of-age novel with some cursing and a few graphic scenes.

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Comment by rglo820 at 15/01/2017 at 02:31 UTC

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I agree - I thought some of the prose was very nice, but the book as a whole was extremely mediocre.

Comment by SamSzmith at 15/01/2017 at 08:22 UTC

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Yep, it was bad. It was also lifted heavily from a true story and didn't deviate or add anything of value to it.

Comment by la-oceane at 15/01/2017 at 15:26 UTC

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I found it was just...fine. As I read it, I kept wishing I'd picked up Helter Skelter instead. The Manson inspiration was far too heavy-handed. I felt like the author originally wanted to just make a novelization of the true story from the pov of a fictional participant but decided that wasn't "literary" enough.

Comment by [deleted] at 15/01/2017 at 16:39 UTC

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I definitely didn't like it, and came here to say essentially this. I literally cannot understand how it is on so many top lists of the year. It was... bad...

Comment by theswanoftuonela at 15/01/2017 at 01:16 UTC

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Oh dear not the whole showing over telling again