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chapter one: dramatis personae

The notes on this page are transcribed from a conversation I had with my sister.

The page itself was originally written in a much shorter form, but as a natural

stopping point, it made sense to end it where it did, so I expanded it.

While it may seem like the conversation in the notes is unfinished, the results

can be seen in the actual chapter. If it is unclear, it should be elucidated by

chapter two.

chapter two: class notes

A few things:

• the broken link is intentional. There is nothing there, and probably never will be.

• The language at the top is one I have made up myself. I have not released a dictionary, but I will give a few hints. Three words are explained in the page itself. Of the other three, one is from Romanian, one from Hungarian, and one from toki pona.

Feel free to try to interpret the sentance, but given how weird I made the

grammar, good luck (send me an email if you think you've got it!).

Also, it uses one-to-one sound-to letter latinisation, but it isn't read like

english. Relevant here, is that w is pronounced like a th in "thing, think" and

"thimble". X is the other th.

• There is some foreshadowing for some characters in the page. One should turn up in the next chapter.